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Would you like to correct the grammar of my text?
Hi, I'm from Switzerland..
Conclusion:
The Golden Gate Bridge isn’t only a very important connection to San Francisco, it’s also a landmark and the main attraction of the city. Otherwise there wouldn’t hundreds of thousands of people all around the world visit this unique building.
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- vor 6 JahrenBeste Antwort
Ok write it like this: the Golden Gate Bridge is not only a very important connection to San Fransisco, it's also a landmark and one of the main attractions of the city. Without it, hundreds of thousands of people all around the world may not visit the city of San Francisco.
You had a couple grammatical errors that the other answer didn't address
- vor 6 Jahren
The golden gate bridge is not a building, it is a bridge.
Change the ending: people who visit this bridge.