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Hi, I'm from Switzerland..

Unfortunately, the Golden Gate Bridge is the building with the world's highest number of suicides. Every year about 15 people commit suicide by jumping from the bridge. Since it’s opening in 1937, 1600 people commit suicide.

Now I would like to tell you something about my personal impression. As I had already said at the beginning, I am thrilled when I saw the Golden Gate Bridge. I often saw the bridge in movies or documentary films. Therefore it was something very special for me to see this bridge in real life andto walk over it. For me it was great to cross the most famous suspension bridge in the world with the car and by foot to enjoy the view. As we crossed the bridge by car into town we had to pay a fee of $5.

For me, as a passionate photographer, it was beautiful to take pictures. We were very lucky with the weather because the Golden Gate Bridge is often befogged. Just when you stand on the bridge you realize how big it is. Because of the length and the wind, we just crossed the half lengt of the bridge by foot.

I was very surprised how many people were crossing the bridge by bicycle. Although it has a bicycle line you have to take attention about the cyclists.

In San Francisco it has a big giftshop. There you can buy DVD's, posters, key chains and more.

For me it was a unique experience to visit this bridge. I hope that I visit San Francisco once again for seeing the city and the Golden Gate Bridge.

Thank you