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The song Sweet Home Alabama is a southern rock song. It was released in the year 1974 by the band Lynyrd Skynyrd on the album Second helping and is a counter-reaction or answer to the song Southern Man by Neil Young. But we would like to tell you more in the analyses about it. The writers of Sweet Home Alabama are Ed King, Gary Rossington and Ronnie Van Zant. The label of the nearly five minutes song is MCA (Music Corporation of America).
The band Lynyrd Skynyrd was foundet in the year 1964 in Jacksonville, Florida by five founding members. In the begining they had concerts in the Southern States of America and celebrated many successes.
Unfortunately the band had in the year 1977 a plane crash. They were on the way to a concert in Louisiana. All founders except Gary Rossington died by the accident. It was impossible that the band continues with just one man. Ten years after the tragedy decided the brother of the leadsinger Ronnie Van Zant to refound the band with the same name. The refounded band had not so many successes.

Now we would like to continue with a new subject, analyses and opinion. We have to say that this song has many hidden statements. It has political statements and criticism to Neil Young a singer in the 1960.

After all this information about the race discrimination, I would like to summarize this topic.

BOSFLASH · Accepted Answer

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The song Sweet Home Alabama is a southern rock song released in the year 1974 by the band Lynyrd Skynyrd on the album Second Helping.  It is a counter-reaction or answer to the song Southern Man, by Neil Young; about which we would like to tell you more in its analyses.

The writers of Sweet Home Alabama are Ed King, Gary Rossington and Ronnie Van Zant. The label of the nearly five minutes song is MCA (Music Corporation of America). 
The band Lynyrd Skynyrd was founded in the year 1964, in Jacksonville, Florida by five founding members. In the beginning they had concerts in the Southern States of America and celebrated many successes.

Unfortunately, on the way to a concert in the year 1977, in Louisiana, all founders except Gary Rossington died in a plane crash. It was impossible for the band to continue with just one man, but ten years after the tragedy the brother of the lead singer, Ronnie Van Zant, decided to bring back the band with the same name. The reestablished band was not as successful as the original.

Now we would like to perform a further analysis of the song “Sweet Home Alabama”, looking into areas possibly responsible for the generation of various and prominent opinions.  We contend that this song has many hidden statements; both political and in criticism of Neil Young as a singer in the 1960’s.

After presenting information and considered opinion about  the racial discrimination implied within the lyric, I would like to summarize this topic.

redalac · Answer

Yeah, but you would have to do it in three steps, mister.

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