Can you correct the grammar?

Question

Hi, i'm a 19 years old student from Switzerland. We have to write a film review about the Shawshank Redemption. 
The teacher will make a mark for this. I would be very happy, if you can correct the grammar. I think i've some mistakes.
Thank you a lot!

The Shawshank Redemption

I would like to lose some words about the film Shawshank Redemption. The author of the book is Steven King and the director Frank Darabont.

Opinion
It was a really interessting film for me. The story was long but I never had boredom. The actors and the author did an absolutly great job.

Summary
The banker Andy Dufresne is convicted of murdering his wife and her lover. He is given two life sentences and sent to Shawshank Prison in Maine. He always claims his innocence, but everyone doubt his words.
He met in the Prison Red and they became good friends. Because Andy was a banker, the supervisors asked him to help with the accounting. Incidentally, he also helped to enlarge the prison library and became an assistant of the librarian Brooks Hatlen. Andy washed a lot of bribe for the director Norton.
Suddenly, a new prisoner, called Tommy, came to Shawshank. Andy’s innocence is now proved. Norton let kill Tommy to keep the secrets in the prison.
One day, Andy escaped – he built a tunnel for about 19 years with a Geologist's hammer.
He withdrew all the washed money of the bank and went to Mexico as a rich man.
Before the police arrived to arrest Norton, because of the bribery, he killed himself.
A short time later Red was released on parol. Red promised Andy to go to a special tree in Buxon and search for a black lavastone. He found the stone and there was a letter. He also went to Mexico to help Andy with his dream. At the end Andy and Red met and hugged them on a beach.

Recommendation
I deeply recommend this film to all people who like to watch movies with excitement, grief and humor.

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Shawshank Redemption
I would like to say some words about the film Shawshank Redemption. The author of the book is Steven King and the director is Frank Darabont.

Opinion
It was a really interesting film for me. The story was long but I wasn't bored. The actors and the author did an absolutely great job.

Summary
The banker, Andy Dufresne, is convicted of murdering his wife and her lover. He is given two life sentences and sent to Shawshank Prison in Maine. He always claims his innocence, but everyone doubts his words. 
He met Red in the prison and they became good friends. Because Andy was a banker, the supervisors asked him to help with the accounting. Incidentally, he also helped to enlarge the prison library and became an assistant of the librarian Brooks Hatlen. Andy bribed the director Norton.
Suddenly, a new prisoner, called Tommy, came to Shawshank. Andy’s innocence was then proved. Norton let kill Tommy to keep the secrets in the prison. (I don’t understand this last sentence)
One day, Andy escaped. He built a tunnel (which took 19 years) with a Geologist's hammer. 
He withdrew all the money from his bank and went to Mexico as a rich man. 
Before the police arrived to arrest Norton, Andy killed himself because of the bribery. 
A short time later Red was released on parol. Red promised Andy to go to a special tree in Buxon and search for a black lava stone. He found the stone and there was a letter. He also went to Mexico to help Andy with his dream. At the end Andy and Red met and hugged each other on a beach.

Reccomendation
I deeply reccomend this film to all people who like to watch movies with excitement, grief and humour.

My note: Very impressive, well done. There was one bit which I didn't understand: Norton let kill Tommy to keep the secrets in the prison. <-- This sentence isn't correct, and I don't know what you are trying to say. Sorry about that one

Can you correct the grammar?

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