Iam from germany and I need your help!!!?

I put **___** where I changed things. In English, we usually don't put quotations around cities.

"...The topic of our investigation **was** the bicycle paths in Hamburg. We wanted **at** look to the bicyle use at the Hamburger district named Altona. We had **assumed** that bicy*c*le usage is higher in **densely** populated urban distric**t**s **for example** in Mundsburg. We also wanted to look +at+ how bicyclists, car driver and pedestrian use the roads without disturbing each other in the **traffic.**

**First,** we had observed **where** in „Altona“ most bicyclists **traveL**, so we can confirm or refute our hypothesis. Then we took **a photo every 10 minutes** to look how the trafic works.

We noticed that the bicyle usage is actually higher in densely populated urban distric**t**s, as in distric**t**s where the leisure **facilities**, shopping **facilities** and so on are subordinate. **The most probable for reason is** that the roads in „Altona“ are quite narrow. **Also, there is not** enough parking for cars, so many people prefer to make use bicycles.

Aim:

The topic of our investigation are the bicycle paths in Hamburg. We wanted to look to the bicyle use at the Hamburg district named 'Altona'. We had the presumption that bicyle usage is higher in densley populated urban districts as for example in 'Mundsburg'. We also wanted to look how cyclists, car driver and pedestrians use the roads without disturbing each other in the trafic.

Process:

Firstly, we observed which points in 'Altona' most cyclists were travelling, so we could confirm or refute our hypothesis. Then we took in the points every ten minutes with a 15 seconds a photo, to look how the traffic works.

Results:

We noticed that the bicyle usage is actually higher in densely populated urban districs, as in districts where the leisure facillities, shopping facillities and so on are subordinate. Probably the reason for that is, that the roads in 'Altona' are quite narrow. And there is not enough parking for cars, so many people prefer to use bicyles.

Hi, do yourself a massive favour and use a spellchecker. Never begin a sentence with 'And'; go for 'Also'. Or you could say, "As there are not enough car-parking spaces, many people choose to make use of bicycles".

In England we often use the words 'cycle' or 'bike' instead of bicycle; 'cyclist' rather than 'bicyclist', (bicyclist being a rather out-dated term.)

Hope this helps.