What do you think of these lyrics?

Hey there guys, I'm going to be recording in the studio soon and while you don't know the melody, I wanted to ask what comes to mind when you read these lyrics :) Any kind of feedback is very welcome. (Ignore the 'uh oh' in the chorus, those are just for my personal use and I'm too lazy to delete them from the lyric version hehe... sorry if it sounds weird without the music).

everybody talks like it’s a dime a dozen

so why waste your time

but you threw me a glance that left me frozen

now I want to throw the dice

it’s a messy game we play, and soon the devil will pay

but where there’s a will, there’s a way

there’s a will, there’s a way

there’s a will, there’s a way

reads like it was written in the stars, you took it too far

always wanting more turned into a tug of war

you were written in code, left me for dead on the road

you chilled me to the core in this tug of war

war, uh oh

war, uh oh

war, uh oh

in this tug of war

everybody’s got some bodies in their closet

but your basement is full of them too

never would I know when you hit me like a comet

what the hell I got into

it’s a messy game we play, and soon the devil will pay

but where there’s a will, there’s a way

there’s a will, there’s a way

there’s a will, there’s a way

reads like it was written in the stars, you took it too far

always wanting more turned into a tug of war

you were written in code, left me for dead on the road

you chilled me to the core in this tug of war

war, uh oh

war, uh oh

war, uh oh

in this tug of war

the harder the conflict the bigger the triumph

I couldn’t predict all we’d have left is silence

you cherry pick the truth to suit your needs

tear me down and try to fix me

it was written in the stars, you took it too far

always wanting more turned into a tug of war

you were written in code, left me dead on the road

you chilled me to the core in this tug of war

in this tug of war (war, uh oh)

in this tug of war (war, uh oh)

in this tug of war (war, uh oh)

the harder the conflict the bigger the triumph

I couldn’t predict all we’d have left is silence

you cherry pick the truth to suit your needs

tear me down but can’t fix me

oh, it was written in the stars