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Can anyone correct my little text my english iam from germany?
On the second day of the Workshop we had developed different scenarios of how our hotel might look architecturally. Each of us has developed many different scenarios that we have in common and then thrashed divided into categories (extension, satellite, parasit etc.)One of the scenarios was “Extension” that can also be seen in the following sketch.
In any case the Udn stills exist as a Building. And we could connect the Hotel with the “Universität der Nachbarschaft”. This would mean that these two different buildings are connected to each other. Nevertheless there could be two separate buildings, which are different from the architecture of each other completely.
Also we could build for example a new hotel that is similar to the construction from the Udn, that can also be seen in the second sketch.
In the middle of the picture you can see the Udn. On the right and left side you can see the hotel Wilhelmsburg which has in the centre clearances. These small areas could be used for example by the hotel visitors as diverse as the community area or it could be use as a private area.
Each of us has developed many different scenarios that we have in common and then thrashed divided into categories (extension, satellite, parasit etc.).
Retrospectively, we come to the conclusion that we had the opportunity to experience a great time where we could developed our creativity. For some group members the workshop was a special experience because they don´t have participated in any workshop. And consequently they didn´t have collected any experience of this kind.
2 Antworten
- peg4cdaLv 5vor 8 JahrenBeste Antwort
Take out the word "thrashed" and remove the capital letters from "workshop", "building" and "hotel". Capital letters are only for proper names or the first word in a sentence.
Maybe someone else can go through the rest of it.
- NylaLv 4vor 8 Jahren
On the second day of the workshop we developed different scenarios on how our hotel might look architecturally. Each of us had developed many different scenarios that we have in common, divided into categories. (extension, satellite, parasit etc.) One of the scenarios was “Extension” which can be seen in the following sketch.
The Udn stills exist as a building. We could connect the hotel with the “Universität der Nachbarschaft”. This would mean that these two separate buildings would be connected to each other. There would be two separate buildings, which are completely different architecturally.
Another alternative would be to build a new hotel which is similar in construction as the Udn. This can be seen in the second sketch. In the middle of the picture you will see the Udn. On the right and left side you can see the hotel Wilhelmsburg, with clearances in the center. These small areas could be used by the hotel visitors as a common area, or alternatively, could be designated as a private space as well.
In retrospect we have come to the conclusion that we had the opportunity to experience a great time where we could developed our creativity together. For some group members the workshop was especially helpful because they had never participated in a collaborative workshop before, finding this new experience extremely beneficial.
Note: The word "parasit" is not a word. I don't know what you were trying to say there. Either eliminate or replace it.
