Iam from Germany can some correct my englisch text?

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Hi Iam from Germany and my englisch is very bad. Can someone correct my Text???

On the second day of the Workshop we had developed different scenarios of how our hotel might look architecturally. One of the scenarios was “Extension” that can also be seen in the following sketch.

In any case the Udn remains exist as a Building. But we could connect the new Hotel with the “Universität der Nachbarschaft”. This would mean that these two different buildings are connected to each other. Nevertheless there could be two separate buildings, which are different from the architecture of each other completely.

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Hi, I am from Germany and my English is very bad. Can someone correct my text?

On the second day of the Workshop we developed different scenarios of how our hotel might look architecturally. One of the scenarios was “Extension” which can also be seen in the following sketch.

In any case the UDN still exists as a building and we could connect the new Hotel with the Universität der Nachbarschaft. This would result in two buildings connected to each other yet distinct, even architecturally.

on the 2d day of the workshop we developed distinct eventualities on how our motel may look architecturally. each human beings had developed many distinct eventualities that we've in undemanding, divided into distinct varieties. (extension, satellite tv for pc, parasit etc.) between the eventualities became “Extension” which will be considered interior properly right here caricature. The Udn stills exist as a construction. lets connect the motel with the “Universität der Nachbarschaft”. this may advise that those 2 separate homes may be linked to one yet another. There may be 2 separate homes, that are thoroughly distinct architecturally. yet another determination may be to construct a clean motel which has similarities in structure because the Udn. this may be considered contained in the 2d caricature. contained in the midst of the photo you'll see the Udn. on the right and left aspect you'll discover the motel Wilhelmsburg, with clearances contained in the midsection. those small parts will be used with the aid of the motel travelers as a undemanding section, or then again, will be targeted as a private area to boot. looking back we've come to the perfect that we had the chance to journey a great time the position lets developed our creativity at the same time. For some team individuals the workshop became exceptionally effective as a results of the undeniable fact that they had in no way participated in a collaborative workshop previously, looking this new journey extremely constructive. note: The note "parasit" isn't a note. i do not recognize what you've been attempting to assert there. both eliminate or replace it.

first drop the c in English we write that sound as sh not sch

next write the extension .

In the second paragraph- the UDN remains exist- I would write still exists , and we could connect the hotel with the university- mind translating that phrase

the word architecture in the last sentence in my view is not isn't necessary

It's fine. Don't worry.