Iam from germany and I need help, can anybody correct my short story my english is not good!!!?

Jayson didn't want to move into the new house. His parents told him that the creepy stories he had heard were all lies, and he had nothing to worry about. The first night he slept in the new house, he went to the bathroom upstairs. When he washed his hands blood flowed out of the faucet.

....Jayson didn´t want to move into the new house but his parents told him that the creepy stories about the house were all lies, he didn´t need to worry. On the first night Jayson woke up and went to the toilet on the top floor, when he washed his hands he saw blood flowing from the tap...

I hope that helps you anymore just send them to me I would be happy to help and hear what happens next in your story.

Jayson and his kinfolk have been by way of flow right into a small, snug domicile in slightly city (village) in this stormy day. the domicile that they had offered replaced into, in accordance to interior of sight thoughts, considered to be very creepy as a result they have been waiting to purchase it at an much less costly value. a house is in simple terms marvelous if it surprising to look at or super or very previous. wet and stormy mutually isn't needed as stormy implies the two circumstances.they won't flow into the domicile if it replaced into inhabited as a manner to declare they have been getting into an uninhabited house is an pointless fact. regardless of the diversities I recommend, your English is comprehensible and might bypass tests extra useful than multiple interior of sight English people ought to bypass. snug with an S not a Z dodge padding out the sentences and easily say what's needed.