Iam from germany and I need help. Can anybody correct mysentence from my story my english is not good?

It is a rainy and story day. Jayson's family has bought a small, cosy, uninhabited house in a little town, which they're moving to today. Before they bought the house, they heard that nobody wanted to buy the house because it was very creepy.

Not sure why you would put "creepy and awesome" at the end rather than just creepy.

Jayson and his family were due to move into a small, cosy house in a little town (village) on this stormy day. The house they had purchased was, according to local stories, considered to be very creepy hence they were able to buy it at an affordable price.

A house is only awesome if it spectacular to look at or large or very old. Rainy and stormy together is not necessary as stormy implies both conditions.They could not move into the house if it was inhabited so to say they were moving into an uninhabited house is an unnecessary statement.

In spite of the changes I suggest, your English is understandable and would pass tests better than a lot of native English people could pass. Cosy with an S not a Z

Avoid padding out the sentences and only say what is necessary.

Here you go.

It is a rainy and stormy say and Jayson's family have bought a small, cozy and uninhabited house in a little town; which they're moving into today. Before they bought the house they heard nobody wanted to by the house, because the House was very creepy and awesome.

If I were you, I would write the story in past tense...it would read better:

It was a stormy day (saying rainy and stormy is a bit abundant) when Jason's family bought the vacant (better word than uninhabited in this context) , cozy little house in the small town that they were moving into. They had heard that nobody wanted to buy the house because it was so ominous (scary, foreboding) and eerie (creepy). (awesome is actually a positive word used to describe something impressive and good).

Hope it helps! :)

Well first off, after your first sentence where it says "before" remember to make the "b" a capital letter since you are starting a new sentence.When you said: " they heard that nobody wanted to buy the house because the house was very creepy and awesome." This doesn't exactly make sense because you are saying nobody "wanted" the house, therefore saying the house is awesome makes it seem like it's a good thing.So I would use another word or just leave it with creepy.Hope this helped :)

A lot of English-speaking teenagers use "awesome" to mean " super, toll, prima!" rather than beängstigend. It would be better to say "the house was very creepy and rather frightening" or "the house had a strange/frightening/ mysterious air" - es hat etwas Geheimnisvolles......

jason's family contributors offered a small, comfortable, uninhabited (vacant?) abode in slightly city. at present is a wet, stormy day and that they are shifting in. that ought to artwork, reckoning on precisely what you're attempting to declare. the ingredient of ways i wrote that's that that's a bad climate day and that they are shifting in for the duration of that nasty climate, it is the only reason i will think of that it concerns what the components is (why you even point out the components)