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Can anybody correct mistakes from english text iam from germany and my english is not good?
The story " Popcorn philosophy" by Daniyal Mueenuddin is about a conversation between a boy and a woman. Murad the protagonist tells her about their first meeting up in the mountains.
Firstly he tells her that his mother died and his father had taken to his bed. So he decides to go to his father´s farm because all people in his environment work in good jobs like in banks or do something in textiles. That is the reason why he feels bad. Because of this he wants to keep his distance. He visits his father´s farm and swears to himself to stay there for three months. During his stay he runs along the canal every day and he barks like mad, so the villagers think he´s going to be crazy. In the course of time he realizes that his problems, which are previously big problems for him aren´t big, if you staring to the stars and to the mosquitoes which are hovering in a little formation. Everything expanding unlimited and so everyone and every problems are inconsequential and that is the meaning of the popcorn philosophy.
i must summeraze in my own words what popcorn philosophy means. Can anybody summeraze this little paragraph for me i don´t understand it. " Staring straight up with the sweat trickling down my face and the mosquitoes hovering in a little formation, and i would think about how space goes on forever, and how little i mean, and how little my problems matter. Real popcorn philosophy".
3 Antworten
- Anonymvor 1 JahrzehntBeste Antwort
I'm not an English major or anything, so I won't go as far as actually editing your paragraph, but I do see some issues. A large portion of your sentences are fragmented. For example "That is the reason he feels bad". Reading this sentence in context with the paragraph, it's easy to understand. If you take that sentence and place it by itself, you have to ask yourself if it makes sense? If you were to use that sentence with someone they would just be confused because there isn't enough information to make it a complete sentence. Overall it's not bad, but it does need some work.
- Anonymvor 1 Jahrzehnt
First he tells her that his mother died and his father had taken to his bed. So he decides to go to his father´s farm because all people in his environment work in good jobs like in banks or do something in textiles, and that is the reason for his feeling bad. Because of this he wants to keep his distance (from who/what). He visits his father´s farm and swears to himself to stay there for three months. During his stay he runs along the canal every day and barks like mad, so the villagers think he´s going crazy. In the course of time he realizes that his problems, which were previously big problems for him aren´t that big, if you stare at the stars and and at the mosquitoes which hover in little formations. Everything expands without limitation, and so everyone and every problem is inconsequential-- and that is what popcorn philosophy means.
Actually, I get what popcorn philosophy means... I just can't get what you want to say in the above paragraph.
I'm not sure about the "everything expanding limiting" part... i don't quite get the idea. But I hope I've helped at least a bit.
- vor 5 Jahren
usually get up at seven o´ clock.I go to the kitchen. I HAVE a cup COFFEE.After I GO to the livingroom and study English grammar. I'M A student from 7:00 to 9:00. After that I go to the bathroom and take a shower.Then I put on my clothes and comb my hair.After that I go to the kitchen and I cook FOR my family.I usually cook eggs.We usually drink milk in the morning. I always play with my children.After that SOMETIMES HE goes to the bedroom.Later he sleeps FOR one hour.I always like to kiss my husband and we like to go to the MOVIES. After that I cook. we eat together. we often drink JUICE WITH the food.we rarely watch TV. My son likes to play ON the computer then he SLEEPS at nine o´ clock. My husband and I ALWAYS GO to sleep after midnight.
