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Will you please comment on this character description?
I posed the question earlier but did not include the description. He is a stranger who wanders into a homestead..
'Buck was fascinated by the stranger; he had never seen the kind of clothing the man was wearing. His shirt, although stained with sweat, looked very fine, the collar was high and stiff, under a jacket that curved towards the back and ended in stubby tails. Under the jacket was a multi buttoned vest. The vest had six pockets; all kinds of stuff could be tucked into them. The vest’s edges were trimmed with black satin. His trousers were of the same material as the jacket, they were very tight fitting, and had narrow cuffs that just clung to the fancy, black boots below. Above the stiff collar was a round face, there was no chin line, his chin was a soft mound that was almost unnoticeable, his beard was snow white, wire rimmed eyeglasses were so delicate they seemed to be part of his face. His eyes were blue and in spite of the ordeal he had been through.'
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- Anonymvor 1 JahrzehntBeste Antwort
An excellent use of adjectives in description of a stranger (you do need a hyphen between multi-buttoned.) that certainly interests the reader into wondering about the context where the action takes place . (You write well . . . )
Good luck to you !
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Quelle(n): http://education.yahoo.com/reference/dictionary/en... http://education.yahoo.com/reference/dictionary/en... http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hyphen