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Ancient Egyptian and (Egyptianescque/Egyptianizing) artifacts in Sicily

The research project aims to analyse a series of ancient egyptian artifacts and ancient egyptian tradition of the pre-Roman Sicily and to point out possible outlivings of the egyptianizing culture on the island up to the late antiquity.

The realisation of a corpus, updated to the stocks of new discoveries,recents re-readings and studies of unreleased material stored in sicilian museums ,contributes to outline a distribution map of the discovering areas and attestation, with particular reference to the different ethnic groups which recognize such products and to the possibility of a reconstruction of the historical location by the direct or indirect market request.It was given preference to the typological,iconographic and iconological research of some “category” of material the most recorded(documentated) on the island like amulets, scarab beetles and similars, cretula,ushabti,bronzes and gems with identification of comparison in the Mediterranean environment (area).

At least the documentation of archeological record containing information of finds, today not more available ,allows not only acquisition of information believed to be lost but also a historical insight to sicilian collecting dynamics and to its rule in the more extended european area from the XVII until XIX century.It was important indeed to illustrate some aspects of the “egyptological” culture of the period generally connected to stereotypic ideas and a lack of direct knowledge of pharaonic reality.