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The novel opens with the Bennet family in Longbourn and their five unmarried daughters. The family itself is not nearly as rich as those they interact with and because they have no sons, the property is entailed to pass to a male heir: in this case Mr. Collins.

Mrs. Bennet is intent on seeing that her daughters are married off to wealthy men, and when Charles Bingley arrives at nearby Netherfield Park she is excited by the prospect of introducing her daughters to him.

She immediately sends her husband to visit him on the first day he arrives.

When he next arrives, Bingley brings with him Mr. Darcy and his two sisters, Miss Bingley and Mrs. Hurst.

Bingley is immediately attracted to Jane Bennet, the oldest of the five sisters.

Darcy, unlike the social apt Bingley, is proud and rude, and immediately insults Elizabeth Bennet's appearance when someone suggests he asks her to dance.

Later, at the next dance - after witnessing the sharpness of her mind - Darcy displays an attraction to Elizabeth at a second ball, but she refuses him because of the insults he heaped upon her before.

Jane and Bingley only become closer and when Jane becomes ill on a visit to Netherfield; she stays there for a few days, asking Elizabeth to join and help care for her. During her stay, Elizabeth is forced to confront Darcy again and again and while she is still disinterested in him, and he begins to fall for her wit and frank approach to conversation, being so used to pretty words from other women.

Elizabeth quickly realizes that Miss Bingley largely dislikes the Bennet family and that she only pretends to be friends with Jane.

Hope that helps.

The novel opens with the Bennet family with their five unmarried daughters in Longbourn. The family itself is not nearly as rich as those they interact with, and because they have no sons, the property is entailed to pass to a male heir, in this case, Mr. Collins.

Mrs. Bennet's intent is to see her daughters married off to wealthy men, so when Charles Bingley arrives at nearby Netherfield Park, she is excited by the prospect of introducing her daughters to him.

She immediately sends her husband to visit him on the first day he arrives.

When arrives the next time, Bingley brings Mr. Darcy with him, along with Mr. Darcy's and two sisters, Miss Bingley and Mrs. Hurst.

Bingley is immediately attracted to Jane Bennet, the oldest of the five sisters.

Darcy, unlike the social apt Bingley, is proud and rude, immediately insulting Elizabeth Bennet when someone suggests he asks her to dance, insulting her appearance.

At the next dance, after witnessing the sharpness of her mind, Darcy displays an attraction to Elizabeth at the ball, but she refuses him because of how his insults heaped upon her before.

Jane and Bingley, however, only become closer and when Jane becomes ill on a visit to Netherfield, she stays there for a few days, asking Elizabeth to join her and help care for her. During her stay, Elizabeth is forced to confront Darcy again and again and while she is still uninterested in him. Meanwhile, he begins to fall for her wit and frank approach to conversation, being so used to pretty words from other women.

Elizabeth quickly realizes that Miss Bingley largely dislikes the Bennet family and that she only pretends to be friends with Jane.

Is this Pride and Prejudice?

I won't correct content, just grammar and style. Style is not important to correct, but will make your work flow better to a reader. Grammar is essential and needs to be corrected.

1) "as rich as those they interact with and (COMMA), because they have no sons" [Style]

2) "at nearby Netherfield Park (COMMA), she is excited" [Style]

3) "unlike the socialLY apt Bingley" [Grammar]

4) "Darcy, unlike the socially apt Bingley, is proud and rude. ALMOST IMMEDIATELY, HE INSULTS ELIZABETH BENNET WHEN PROMPTED TO ASK HER TO DANCE, BY WRONGFULLY COMMENTING ON HER APPEARANCE". [Grammar and style - the second part in your original text didn't really make sense, so I've added in some words to make it sound better ^_^]

5) "Because OF THE INSULTS he heaped upon her before" [Grammar - extra word "how" not needed]

6) "Jane and Bingely (COMMA), however (COMMA), only become" [Style]

Fairly good compared to some of the rubbish I have to correct on here. Good job !

...... Bennet family with their 5 daughters in Longbourn.

.......visit him on the day he arrives.

.......he heaped upon her previously.

My comments, hope that helps.