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New song lyrics! Need your opinion on them, young or older. Care to comment?
I think I'm starting to get the hang of this.... :)
Square One
Sundown becomes sunset fast
The future becomes the past
Lists of dreams that didn't last
The die of fate is cast
Another day come and gone
Always back to Square One
The Spinners, Bob Seger then Kid Rock
On sale items go out of stock
Doors open, then they lock
Constant circling of the clock
The chimes ring in a steady run
Always back to Square One
On and on and on and on and on
On and on and on and on and on
Fashion picks another style
Signposts add another mile
Shredded papers from a file
More changes all the while
You win some, and you lose some
Always back to Square One
Birth, nurtured, until grown
Another promised seed is sown
Try to learn all the unknown
Black then green then brown the lawn
A little more rain, a little sun
Always back to Square one
On and on and on and on and on
On and on and on and on and on
Proud parents' daughter or son
First lose innocence then the fun
You're lonesome, you choose someone
Lucky at love and then it's gone
Spiral down the heart forlorn
Just to find a better one
All the power of King Kong
Hopeful scavengers led along
Until your call to life is done
Always back to Square One
Always back to Square One
Always back to Square One
Laughing Dolphin Music
March 22, 2012
2 Antworten
- GIRLXXXLv 4vor 9 JahrenBeste Antwort
I love them! Really great! I love the theme...I like sad reflective songs like that!
One question...don't rhymes for lyrics usually go like this:
A
B
C
B
(Where the word at the end of lines 2 and 4 rhyme?)
In my opinion there are too many rhyming words in a row, if you know what I mean.
- vor 9 Jahren
The lyrics are all over the place, bro. You need to take one simple concept into mind and write all you can about that one subject. Lyrics for a good song are run off of one simple thought. You're thinking too much, bro. This stuff comes from the heart, not the brain.
