Könnte mir jemand diesen Englisch-Text korrigieren?

Ich muss für den Austausch einen Brief an meine zukünftige Gastfamilie auf englisch schreiben. Da wären wir beim Problem: Ich komme da mit meinem Schulenglisch nicht sehr weit, könnte mir jemand also meine Fehler korrigieren? DAAAAAAAANKE!!

Dear guest family

My name is Mala, am sixteen years old and lives together with my family in a flat. I am a happy and positively thinking person who laughs with pleasure. In conflicts vemühe I me to introduce my opinion, to find compromises, however, primarily. I am spontaneous and pliable. In the beginning towards foreign person I am shy, however, this lies down fast. Besides, I would say that I have a good contact with people and am very outgoing.

Because I had to learn up to now seldom, now I have some trouble to motivate myself to the learning. A wide weakness is that I do not have the biggest self-confidence and can be often unnerved of what I try to gain control, nevertheless, more and more.

To my parents I have a rather good respect, I can talk with them about everything and if argue sometimes we to us, this lies down relatively fast again.

My mother is called Kathrin, is 49 years old and works on some days in a coffee as a service. Besides, she was active very long as a day mother. Besides, she sings once weekly in a choir.

My father is called Nico, is 50 years old and works as a constructive locksmith in the company X. Besides, he is active in the church association. He is very open and now and again a little bit loudly, because he is an Italian. Unfortunately, have not grown up my sister and I, however, in two languages what I find a great pity ones.

My sister is called Sara, is 13 years old and visits at the moment the Sekundarschule. Since I go to the canton school, do not make my sister and I any more so much common. Still we compensate and when time to undertake a little bit together, it is even something little one.

Since the upper stage I very often meet my friends who went with me to the same district school class. We see ourselves practically every day and also undertake much together. They are every now and then somewhat of the most important. The defection to the canton school was a complete new beginning for me. I came to a class, with people whom I did not know. Since this defection one year ago I have found great new friends.

I love to travel and to get to know new people. Moreover, I undertake with pleasure something with friends. Besides, I go once a week to the Hip-Hop what is offered as a school sport. Twice weekly I still visit the ladies' squad of our village. It is a pleasant balance to the school everyday life.

I also go very much with pleasure to the cinema or make a DVD evening with friends. To my predilections also belongs what probably every woman makes with pleasure: Shopping!

In summer, 2010 I have made a two-week exchange to Liverpool from what I arouses enthusiasm back home came. Linguistically I have not learnt during two weeks a lot, however, the people whom one has got to know and the experience were simply brilliant!

I think, the best kind of learning a language is the confrontation with her, because we go with the family always to Italy, I was entrancedly from this country, however, I would like to get to know I Italy with pleasure behind the scenery. Later I would like to travel sometimes largely around the world.

When to myself, finally, with the defection to the canton school which offered possibility to make one exchange year I was away there and. My desirable destination fell immediately on Italy, because I had at school already some years of Italian lessons and I love the language and the temperament of the Italians.

I hope you have received an impression from me and pleases me about the year!

Lots of love

Mala