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O my Solitude
I love u dear !
when all part away
you came my way
to live by my side,
to be my pride, 
to do my favour, 
to friend for ever ! 
I love to be caressed 
of  your rough coarse hands
to be fondled all over
to feel the soft garlands. 
You are my solace, 
you gave me all comfort ; 
you are everything to me
you  treasure in my heart !
I know you are mine
And you’ll be mine for last.
from my heart here I vow ,
never ever We’ll apart  !

neonman · Accepted Answer

One to read a few times.  Nicely said.  You might want to review your third to last line and last line. 'For last' is odd as well as 'we'll apart'.

sonu92167 · Answer

These line touched me too much :

you treasure in my heart !
I know you are mine
And you’ll be mine for last.
from my heart here I vow ,

Nice poet liked too much

chanda · Answer

It was nice to read and it is the felling of love simply superb

Raakesh · Answer

Very very touching. Continue yours this good hobby.

Sam · Answer

I really enjoyed. Best of luck.

♪♫NancyLiz ® ♫♪ ™ · Answer

Nice, 
I like it.

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