Ist mein text für die Englisch-Presentation gut? Lesst ihn durch!!!!?

Hallo Leute,

Ich bin in der 8. klasse und muss ne Englisch-Presentation halten über die Simpsons!! Das ist mein Bisheriger Text :

The Simpsons

“The Simpsons” were created by the cartoonist Matt Groening in 1987. At first it was a series of 30-second spots for the FOX series “The Tracy Ullman Show”. A total of 48 shorts were produced over the first three seasons, and Bart is the only character to appear in all 48. The response to the spots was so positive that FOX made a half-hour Christmas special on 17.December 1989.

Since 14.January, 1990 “The Simpsons” is a regular series. At the end of July, 2007 came the Simpsons - the film worldwide to the cinemas. Simpsons also appear in comics and in computer games.

Groening named the characters after members of his family: Father Homer, Mother Marge, and sisters Lisa and Maggie. The son was Bart, and would be given characteristics of Matt himself and his brother Mark.

“The Simpsons” is registered in the Guinness Book of Records for the longest animated series in the television history. There are more than 200 episodes.

“The Simpsons” has become a staple for guest stars all over music, sports, movies, and television like:

Bette Midler

James Brown

Meryl Streep

Kathleen Turner

Aerosmith

Siegfried and Roy

“The Simpsons” has been honored with 10 Emmy Awards, 7 Annie Awards ,

3 Genesis Awards , 3 International Monitor Awards and 3 Environment Media Awards.

Findet ihr das gut bis jetzt?? Oder zu wenig?? Was könnt ich noch hinschreiben??

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