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Hi I'm from Germany...please help me.?

Hi i'm a german student and need your help...

I have to write for school a comment...

please can you correct my sentence:

"For instance, to earn much money only."

"Talking about money: these treatments will be definitely very expensive."

grammar? expression? wrong

Thx =)

Update:

(first sentence is about persons who abuse medical science only to earn much money...)

(Should i show you the complete text?)

4 Antworten

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  • SKCave
    Lv 7
    vor 1 Jahrzehnt
    Beste Antwort

    OK The first one is only like half a sentence.If I can add a hypothetical first half: People who abuse medical science do so only to earn a lot. of money.

    The second one is pretty well OK, but I would suggest: "On the subject of money, these treatments will be very expensive." or these treatments would be very expensive.

    Hope this helps

    Quelle(n): Teacher for 30 years
  • vor 1 Jahrzehnt

    The first one isn't a complete sentence. To earn much money only... what? Only makes you sad? Only hurts you in the end?

    And the second one -"These treatments will DEFINITELY BE very expensive."

    http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index?qid=200908...

  • vor 1 Jahrzehnt

    Perhaps the first sentence can read like this...

    The misuse of medical science can sometimes be attributed to a profit motive.

    Aufedersein!

    :-)

  • rock
    Lv 4
    vor 5 Jahren

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