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Do you understand / like my poem? (Poems don't have to be about love or depression)?
Private moments.
Golden sunlight streaming through
The cracks in the door of our outside loo
And winter winds do whistle round
the six inch gap between door and ground.
And as I think and reads me paper
I thinks to me self what a caper
I dreams of getting a council flat
Whats got an inside bog and that
No more midnight torchlit trips
down the garden when I gets the shits
But being inside it makes me think
Will I be able to stand the stink
I dont know about these modern gadgets
Me guns all right for shooting rabbits
But when it comes to toiletry
I think I'll stick with me old privy
7 Antworten
- vor 1 JahrzehntBeste Antwort
I love it - it's definitely my style of humor lol you're right poems always seem to be about love and depression and it gets so boring. Keep it up I would like to see more of your work =)
- vor 1 Jahrzehnt
Creative and humorous. You are right... poems to not need to be about love and death and such. You did well with this one. Keep up the good work.
- anonymousLv 4vor 1 Jahrzehnt
Very clever! And you're right about love and depression poems...I especially get sick of the love poems!
- Anonymvor 1 Jahrzehnt
I am to lazy to read the whole thing but by the first 2 lines it sounds really good!!
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