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sweet_blue fragte in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · vor 1 Jahrzehnt

Spring Poem ( How and where can it be improved )?

With the melting of snow,

water is everywhere,

Anyone would know.

The excessive water causes floods,

seeping in garages, houses and offices.

There would also be mud.

Also the road construction

causing many headaches

Road closed, and detours are some directions.

Never rely on the date,

March 20th, spring, but it can still snow

The arrival of spring can be early or late.

Other signs of spring

leaves grass become green

with birds that sweetly sing.

People get ready to plant gardens and flowers

This work is done each year

Planting can take hours.

Dandelions show their yellow faces

in grass, garden, flower bed back alley

In other words these are every place.

One other type of pest, would be mosquitos

because they are pests no one likes

Their bites will hurt, and a person will know.

Update:

No rude answers

and no insulting me

Update 2:

These are 2 or 3 poems in one

2 Antworten

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  • vor 1 Jahrzehnt
    Beste Antwort

    Some of the poem is really good. Like some more than others. Llke the part from never rely, to this work is done each year. I also like the line dandelions, up to flower bed.

  • vor 1 Jahrzehnt

    no offense, but its pretty basic. its okay i guess for 5th grade and below in my opinion. im sorry if youre older. i think u should work on thinking more deeply about spring and how people react more with more powerful speech. or try just looking at one facet with detail and good vocabulary. becuase after all, everybody knows what spring is.

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