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God is first. Mankind is second. I am third. I live by faith in God and in my Lord and Savior Jesus Christ. I edit and critique because of the years of training and education I've had. Bachelor in Science Computer Information and Minor in English. I am an editor, writer, poet and artist. I take requests and post them here. I've done a lot of technical writing; and in tech writing it is imperative that every acronym be explained at least once. So, if you use an acronym, I may suggest in my answer that you provide an explanation about it. It is not meant as an insult, it is simply my tech background talking. Above everything else is my great love and gratitude to God, the awesome creator, and Jesus Christ, my Lord & Savior. I have been sealed through the gift of the Holy Spirit, & keep a short leash on my sins. Pray for forgiveness for me and others that I may have sinned against. I always live in faith. EWAP = Editor, Writer, Artist, Poet

  • This sonnet needs direction, but I can't see where to change it. Are you able to?

    Lonely Love

    By Victoria Tarrani

    201304.27

    In the nether regions of yesterday

    The salt wind blow crystals of icy spray.

    I walk along the cliffs on the lea side

    Chilled to the marrow lengthening my stride

    I remember the touch of bluish lips

    So cold they hurt as lust makes my heart flip

    In the down of the deep feathery bed

    Like lovers we celebrate we're not wed

    You ask, I answer, too many times now

    Your wife, my husband behind secret's bough

    Pretend they don't know we'll always be one

    A soul split in half until day is done

    My eyes close seeing beyond tomorrow

    The joy of living without the sorrow.

    6 AntwortenPoetryvor 7 Jahren
  • Any reason that I cannot open my Classic email folders?

    This began recently.

    I've contacted Yahoo twice, which means they have not ever responded and probably never will. I pay for my account, which helps block SPAM.

    I see there are over 800 unread messages in various folders, but I cannot open any of them. Many of these are in the SPAM folder, but I cannot delete the messages either.

    All help is greatly appreciated.

    .

    5 AntwortenOther - Yahoo Mailvor 8 Jahren
  • New poem: Sing to Me...if you may?

    Inspired by Dallas. http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index?qid=201208...

    Sing to Me

    by Victoria Tarrani

    © 201208.29

    I toss a rose

    toward the stage

    it misses

    hitting a stranger

    he smiles

    his eyes shining

    reflected light

    fireworks

    music is background

    our eyes locked

    oh for the beauty

    of a new song.

    .

    19 AntwortenPoetryvor 9 Jahren
  • New Poem: Minute Minutes, if you may c/c?

    Minute Minutes

    By Victoria Tarrani

    © 201208.08

    Caught

    in the stillness

    of a silent moment.

    I cannot break

    my gaze;

    seeing far

    beyond the blank wall,

    history is

    written on the air.

    Crying

    slipped and fell

    split my eyelid open

    blood everywhere

    head wounds

    bleed so badly.

    Giggling

    so many presents

    under the tree,

    “lass, he came”

    wonderment in a

    child’s voice

    touching

    a doll as tall

    as me.

    All the yesterdays

    flicker by

    like a fast forwarded

    video

    happy, sad

    laughter, sorrow

    moments cherished

    and forgotten

    Tomorrow

    may never come

    but yesterday is present.

    .

    24 AntwortenPoetryvor 9 Jahren
  • Poem: Choice .... your thoughts?

    .

    Choice

    By Victoria Tarrani

    © 201207.23

    stare

    into the chasm’s face

    see

    the black yawning gap

    it

    beckons you

    enter

    you see more

    images flicker by

    your child

    her children

    others you love

    the abyss

    calls to you

    turn from it

    return to the

    ones you love

    pain passes

    tomorrow

    .

    20 AntwortenPoetryvor 9 Jahren
  • Is this a typical reaction to Amox TR-CLV 875-125 MG tablets?

    This is an antibiotic. Amoxicillin/clavulanic acid is a penicillin-type antibiotic used to treat a wide variety of bacterial infections. It works by stopping the growth of bacteria.

    http://wiki.answers.com/Q/What_is_the_side_effects...

    I've taken Amoxicillin without any problems. I just started this pill and can barely stay awake to write this question. Also I itch everywhere. I've only taken one of the two prescribed for the day. My eyes keep closing.

    I had an anaphylectic reaction to an antibiotic many years ago and it started this way.

    All information and suggestions are highly valued.

    Thanks.

    © ♪♫♪ tori ♫♪♫

    ~.

    6 AntwortenOther - Diseasesvor 9 Jahren
  • If you may c/c my spring cleaned poem GLOVES for me?

    Gloves

    by Victoria Tarrani

    © 200903.30

    © 201204.11 (edit)

    It's so easy to glide

    through the valley

    of dreams with you.

    Your feet rarely

    touch the ground

    as you run,

    your face lifted

    to the sun or clouds,

    or simply to feel

    the moist breeze.

    Then you tumble;

    yes, I will be there

    to help you

    out of shadows,

    bushes, or even the

    misplaced azure creek.

    You fit so easily

    into my life;

    you cover me

    like skin; I think it

    is where you live

    when I slip on the soft

    pink leather gloves

    you found for me last year,

    or was it a decade ago?

    No matter; each night

    I slide between

    bold red percale sheets,

    your choice, of course.

    You said they made

    it easier to find

    me when I drift

    into my dreams.

    You are my sanity,

    my reality;

    perhaps you await me

    when I can slip through

    the mist covering life.

    ~

    8 AntwortenPoetryvor 9 Jahren
  • Will you give me your c/c on my poem ZEPHYR please?

    I'd love your comments and/or critique for this poem. I wrote it for my father just after he left this world. I hadn't even read it in years; I was too raw then.

    Thank you.

    Zephyr

    by Victoria Tarrani

    © 200202.16

    Silken wings

    ride upon a zephyr

    across the sea

    dancing

    to the fluttering beat

    of a new melody.

    Quixotic thoughts

    slip through the mazes

    of imagination

    to glitter and

    twinkle

    in green eyes.

    Mortal loss

    everlasting gift --

    dad.

    ~

    11 AntwortenPoetryvor 9 Jahren
  • My poem WORDS was deleted. How can I discover why?

    How odd, I thought when I saw the poem was gone.

    It was up for two weeks, resolved with a best answer and poof--it was gone. At least I received the critiques I sought to improve the poem, but this is the first time something like this has happened to me and I am stunned. Not upset, just shocked.

    Is there a way to find out what happened?

    .

    14 AntwortenYahoo Answersvor 9 Jahren
  • Will you C & C SHE a new first draft poem for me?

    Written in response to this question:

    http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=AnSNM...

    She

    by Victoria Tarrani

    © 201203.

    She looks upon the world,

    but does not see

    hateful crimes stealing life,

    love, money, family.

    She sees colors of life

    with each vision

    that crosses her view;

    free of humanity's waste.

    The golden glow of a waning sun

    slipping below the horizon

    as stars twinkle in the east

    with the slightly visible crescent moon.

    She hears the color coded leaves

    blowing in the winds as season

    changes caress her skin

    and touch her heart and soul.

    Listening to the melody of the night

    sensations stir and she writes

    of the beauty that is hidden

    to Earth's wretched minions.

    ~~

    13 AntwortenPoetryvor 9 Jahren
  • Will you C & C this SPRING poem for me?

    Spring

    by Victoria Tarrani

    © 201203.27

    Sprites dance in the mist of the forest

    pansies and pink posies all aglow

    rowdy nymphs play songs to a cyclist

    inviting all to be in the show

    new flowers abloom bringing sweet cheer

    goldenrod's bow, it is their premier.

    .

    15 AntwortenPoetryvor 9 Jahren
  • Would you C & C this "Goner" poem for me?

    To answer this question

    http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index?qid=201203...

    I created a small poem.

    ~

    Goner

    By Victoria Tarrani

    © 201203.23

    Dying rivers wash thick muddy

    earth across once fertile land,

    arid air cooks the clay

    denying it the sun and wind

    letting it go for eons -- to heal

    angry seas poured salt water until

    nothing could grow. No food,

    dry rivers, no water, no life.

    .

    13 AntwortenPoetryvor 9 Jahren
  • Will you comment on an edited older poem entitled Destiny?

    Found this in a WIP (work in progress) folder in my email. I didn't even know it existed.

    Destiny

    by Victoria Tarrani

    © 200806.05

    © 201203.09 edit

    My beloved leaves me.

    I am trapped yet

    he will travel,

    settle far away,

    await my arrival.

    Will distance change

    the amazement

    I saw in his eyes

    as he knew our future

    was to be one?

    A day, a month, years

    the time passes slowly

    then rapidly as life

    rushes at both of us.

    But I recall my

    beloved, the boy

    of my youthful

    days of folly.

    I wonder, will fate,

    wild and wily,

    unite us when

    the season of

    our separation ends.

    Each time we try

    to bring ourselves

    together, you alchemist

    you, interfere.

    Destiny, unite us!

    We had mere days

    to know we were

    meant to be

    joined always.

    Perhaps we are connected

    by the memory alone.

    ~

    17 AntwortenPoetryvor 9 Jahren
  • Will you c/c on this first draft poem called The Greatest Love?

    It has been very long since I have written anything.

    The Greatest Love (first draft)

    by Victoria Tarrani

    © 201203.07

    No love compares to yours.

    My heart lit with flames when we met.

    I was studying The Word at that moment.

    I said come into my heart my life is yours.

    Please forgive my sins--those

    I committed and those I shrugged off

    not helping a person in need.

    I forgive all who have brought me pain

    in order to receive you.

    I love you more each day

    your Holy Spirit resides in me.

    God within me with all the power

    to heal and change as you wish.

    Just three months ago, you saved

    my life. My soul has always been yours.

    If I waited and not gone to the hospital,

    disobeyed you,

    then in two more days I would die,

    but you nudged me to go.

    I would be dead without your nudge.

    How can my love for any man,

    woman, child or baby

    compare to the greatest love

    I will ever know.

    It is your love for me, my Lord

    my Savior, my God.

    There is but one God,

    and His love is enough

    for the whole world.

    In the beginning the Word was with God

    the Word was God ... murdered on

    a Roman Cross by God's people ...

    You said, if I do not leave you,

    I cannot send the comforter.

    I am here when you want me.

    I want to come home.

    I've been there twice

    and never wanted to leave,

    but I tumbled through the

    tunnel of faces and fell

    into my body. I longed to

    return; I still try.

    I understand I am to share what I know

    "There is life on the other side of the veil.”

    .

    17 AntwortenPoetryvor 9 Jahren
  • Will you let me know if you have a poem you want me to answer?

    I will do my best to get to your work. It's just hard right now.

    I've been ill. If you want me to answer your poem, please send me a message through my profile page letting me know. I try to get on line at least once a day. I'm on the mend, but have to get 18 more injection drips of Iron Dextran and about 8 cardio/pulmonary tests done over the next few weeks. I'd appreciate all prayers for healing.

    But the good news is I went into the hospital at the right moment. Hemoglobin at 5.5 is just above 5.0 where your heart stops. I was told organs were shutting down. But that young stud blood they gave me brought it up and me too. So, if you are anemic, it's nothing to let just let go on and on. 2 weeks ago I was 10.9, slightly below 11-13 range, and something I pondered. But ... I should have gone in to have my blood checked again.

    Good health to all of you.

    tori

    27 AntwortenPoetryvor 9 Jahren
  • Did you know you can leave your questions up for longer than 4 days?

    When you ask a question, click on EDIT, there you will find "Extend Deadline".

    It makes it easier for those of us who do not get to YAP daily to participate.

    I hope you will leave them up. I've had several answers come in after the normal period would have expired.

    I'll be away from a computer for many days and would like to catch up when I return.

    tori

    17 AntwortenYahoo Answersvor 9 Jahren
  • Will you take the challenge and write a poem using these words?

    I hope you write a poem

    and the result is your style

    a haiku, sonnet or anthem

    and have fun; hope it's worthwhile.

    Although they may show up as misspelled, I assure they are in the dictionary and spelled correctly.

    Use as many words as you can; I hope this is fun. LC's always are and this is my first challenge. You can always make up your own meaning, if you choose.

    adventive

    adytum

    anamnesis

    boscage

    calvous

    canticle

    ectype

    fusty

    gangrel

    interpolation

    novation

    procellous

    solatium

    ~

    14 AntwortenPoetryvor 9 Jahren
  • Will you provide critiques and comments on a new poem Two-headed Coin?

    Two-headed Coin

    by Victoria Tarrani

    © 201112.30

    Reason and doubt, two sides of the same coin

    for reason provides justification.

    It is the cause why one leaves then rejoins

    the jolly group enjoying vacation.

    Sometimes it is good to be on ones own

    to analyze and calculate the truth

    for unclouded thoughts while one is alone

    build up courage for travel through ones youth.

    Coherent and logical is the path

    to systematically define ones life

    but wavering in doubt sets up the wrath

    that transforms the outcome from joy to strife.

    Doubting reality brings fantasy

    and hesitation stops further changes

    life may go beyond lawful boundaries

    while rules lay broken, there are no places.

    Where is there to go when nothing makes sense?

    Uncertain, no opinion or belief

    whereas logic would provide good defense

    joy replaces questions; feel pure relief.

    ~

    20 AntwortenPoetryvor 9 Jahren