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I am thinking of starting a fashion blog! But I can't think of a name! Ugh I don't know what to do! I am totally having writer's block! I need help. Thanks so much!:)

Ok, so I am in middle school. For Language Arts class we are hosting a 5K to support Special Olympics. For our final project, we had to write a poem to share with first graders at the school down the hill. I wrote a poem and I want whatever feedback you have to offer. But remember, I'm not a professional poet. And also, I need to figure out a title. Please please help me with a title. Thanks! here's my poem:

I am judged.

I am stared at.

I am teased.

For something I can't help.

I was born like this.

And there's no way I can fix it.

Yeah I'm slower in school than the other kids,

but besides that..

I'm just like you.

If you think about it with an open mind,

we are more alike than different.

You have eyes,

I have eyes.

You have friends,

I have friends.

You are a kid,

I'm a kid.

You like to compete in sports,

I like to compete in sports.

Special Olympics is one of the few places

where I can go and compete,

I am just like everyone else.

No differences.

No judging.

No stares.

No teasing.

But competing gives me the best feeling in the world.

Running at a pace,

my heart beating out of my chest.

And I'm not looking back.

Never.

The wind is rushing through my hair,

and it feels amazing.

Sun rays beat down on me

and soak into my skin.

The lines of the track race past my eyes.

The feeling of pride and joy

overwhelms me as I cross the finish line.

I may not win,

but let me be brave in the attempt.

I'm writing a poem about Special Olympics for school, because we are hosting a 5K to raise money for SO. The poem is from the point of view of a Special Olympics athlete. Please tell me what you think. Remember, I'm a middle school kid, I am not a professional. Thank you and please no hate. :)

I am judged.

I am stared at.

I am teased.

For something I can't help.

I was born like this.

And there's no way I can fix it.

Yeah I'm slower in school than the other kids,

but besides that..

I'm just like you.

If you think about it with an open mind,

we are more alike than different.

You have eyes,

I have eyes.

You have friends,

I have friends.

You are a kid,

I'm a kid.

You like to compete in sports,

I like to compete in sports.

Special Olympics is one of the few places

where I can go and compete,

I am just like everyone else.

No differences.

No judging.

No stares.

No teasing.

But competing gives me the best feeling in the world.

Running at a pace,

my heart beating out of my chest.

And I'm not looking back.

Never.

The wind is rushing through my hair,

and it feels amazing.

Sun rays beat down on me

and soak into my skin.

The lines of the track race past my eyes.

The feeling of pride and joy

overwhelms me as I cross the finish line.

I may not win,

but let me be brave in the attempt.

I am judged.

I am stared at.

I am teased.

For something I can't help.

I was born like this.

And there's no way I can fix it.

Yeah I'm slower in school than the other kids,

but besides that..

I'm just like you.

If you think about it with an open mind,

we are more alike than different.

You have eyes,

I have eyes.

You have friends,

I have friends.

You are a kid,

I'm a kid.

You like to compete in sports,

I like to compete in sports.

Special Olympics is one of the few places

where I can go and compete,

I am just like everyone else.

No differences.

No judging.

No stares.

No teasing.

But competing gives me the best feeling in the world.

Running at a pace,

my heart beating out of my chest.

And I'm not looking back.

Never.

The wind is rushing through my hair,

and it feels amazing.

The feeling of pride and joy

overwhelms me as I cross the finish line.

I may not win,

but let me be brave in the attempt.

I had to write a poem for school. This poem is from the point of view of a Special Olympics athlete. Just for an extra fact. The last line, "If I do not win, let me be brave in the attempt" is the motto for special Olympics. Honest opinion please? I'm not a professional writer, but I just need some feedback. Thank you!:)

I have to write a rough draft for homework. We are hosting a 5K for Special Olympics and so we are writing a poem about it. And I can't think of anything!!! Please help me. Maybe just a line idea or something. I want it to be free verse and to be inspirational. Please don't be rude with your comments. I just need help. Huge writer's block:(

I have to write a rough draft for homework. We are hosting a 5K for Special Olympics and so we are writing a poem about it. And I can't think of anything!!! Please help me. Maybe just a line idea or something. I want it to be free verse and to be inspirational. Please don't be rude with your comments. I just need help. Huge writer's block:(

Okay so I was looking for different things to masturbate with so I tried a stick and I think I stuck it up to far because I can't get it out..

Please help!

I am really sure I'm in love with him..

He makes my heart melt

I think I have a crush on him!

What do I do and how do I meet him?

Well this stereotype has been bothering me a bit.

And I fear I may be black because sometimes I smoke weed!

Help?

My legs are so tan and juicy. I just want to eat them. How do I stop craving them so much! I have already eaten off half of my left leg. What can I do? Please help before I eat my own legs!

I am getting very hairy. All over my body...:L Also, I like to eat raw animals and roll in the leaves. I also noticed that I smell very ugly lately. Maybe I'm turning into a bear. Or my friend's mom. Please help. Thank you.

My dogs always seem to lick me..

I always feel a sexual tension between me and my dog.

Whenever I see other dogs they tend to bark at me.

Are they flirting?

My parents don't look Asian and I don't either. But I got a 100% on a test and now I think I'm Asian.

I stuck a stick up my butt and now I can't get it out without it hurting. Please help!!

Me and my family are going on a cruise in December to Half Moon Cay, Grand Turk, and Nassau. If you have ever been there, what were some things you enjoyed? Activities/Excursions. I don't care about what you think about these destinations and I'm not asking anybody to book anything for me. So if you want to be a troll and criticize my question, don't even bother. I don't care if you think these places are trash or if you think I'm stupid for going in December. I don't really care. So, if you would answer this I would be very grateful! Thank you:)

I'm going on a cruise this Christmas! We're going to Nassau, Grand Turk, and Half Moon Cay. I know you can book excursions with the cruise line, but those are more expensive. I want something that's not with Carnival and inexpensive. I really want to swim with the manatees or the sea lions. I already found a mini sub thing I want to do in Nassau. So I need to find a sea lion excursion in Half Moon Cay or Grand Turk. Also, my dad wants to go tarpon fishing. Thanks! :)

My family and I are going to a cruise in the Bahamas this December. I want to swim with a sea animal when I'm there. Our ports of call are Half Moon Cay, Grand Turk, and Nassau. I would rather swim with sea turtles, sea lions, or manatees. If you know of a good place to swim with those kinds of animals, please tell me. Thanks! :)

Ok, So I got a Pantech Pursuit for my birthday last year in November. We got a two year contract, but this year I want an iPhone 3 with 8GB memory. What would it cost to get one?

I am licensed to do stuff for the U of A! And I already do my own shirts... but I work for my husband's t-shirt business. I want to start my own business. I have already thought of a name but now I don't know what to after that. Logo... and then what? And my daughter so can set me up on facebook. So tell me extra things I need to do! Thanks for the help! :)

I am entering a drawing contest to raise money for a program that I do called Soldiers' Angels to help our troops. I am entering a drawing contest and the grand prize is $1000!! And everybody says I am an amazing drawer and I think so too! And It is $5 to enter so it has to be amazing! But I have no idea what to draw! I can't draw people!! So please please help me!!