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I'm extremely bored right now and just got a new sketchbook. I'm not really a great draftsman, but I want to try some new ideas. Any suggestions?

I will be drawing with regular graphite pencils or ink pens.

Skyrim Freeze.

I got Skyrim when it first came out, and it was fine for the first two months, but since then I've not been able to play the game. It freezes within 3-5 minutes of me loading the game and forces me to manually restart my xbox. I've cleared the cache multiple times, formatted my harddrive, moved my xbox to a more open area, cleaned the disk, deleted all old saves, turned off auto saves, and everything else I could think of. My xbox plays all other games (including Oblivion) perfectly, and the disk plays well on multiple other xboxes. I'm desperate to find a way to fix this and would be grateful to anyone who can figure this out for me, thanks.

I recently purchased "Eternal Darkness: Sanity's Requiem", and was interested in any other psychological thriller or horror game that is for either GameCube, Playstation 2, Xbox, or Xbox 360. Games and game series I'm already looking at include:

Fatal Frame

Silent Hill

Resident Evil (I've played a few of these)

Condemned

Any suggestions?

This morning I woke up with all of the symptoms for viral pinkeye. Normally, I'd go to the doctor and see what he had to say, but I have an important 5-day trip in two days and too much planning and booking to do to go and wait for four hours for him to look at my eye... Does anyone know a reliable home treatment I can do that will cure my pink-eye in a short amount of time?

I used to rp on gaiaonline a lot but my mother blocked it. Any suggestions?

Alright, this is from an old short story of mine, and I was just wondering if it was worth salvaging.

Note:: It's a bit, if not extremely cliche.

A high pitched laugh rang through the tense air of the night. Three figures huddled close together for warmth breathed out sharply and the air turned smoky. They warily followed the sound with their eyes to see a female figure standing at the end of the alley they were situated in, her attention obviously focused on them. She stepped forward a bit so that she was partially illuminated by the light of an apartment window and the wariness of the three figures condensed into pure terror as they recognized the garb of a madwoman. She wore a red tuxedo jacket decorated with sparkles and a black bow-tie, along with a matching top hat. Covering her legs were white tights with a simple pair of black high heeled boots. She held a jeweled cane in her left hand and a whip in the right, poised to strike. She looked like a ringmaster fresh out of the circus, and oddly, she appeared to be in her element as she approached the figures. Suddenly she was standing fully in the light and she raised a finely arched eyebrow. The group was made up of two men and a girl. She turned slightly and her face became visible. If it wasn’t for the sadistic gleam in her eye her facial features would have appeared almost angelic.

She had grey-blue eyes that seemed to hold the moon and sun in their grasp and the flawless skin worthy of none but Aphrodite, the goddess of love and beauty herself. Light blond hair fell around her face in torrents of almost liquid gold, adding to her angelic appearance. She had rosebud lips that were lightly covered with pink gloss and appeared to be in the middle of changing expressions. She looked as if she would either burst into tears or begin beaming, gracing the world with a rare smile.

Instead she did neither, and she smirked as she turned back to the group.

I need constructive criticism on this poem... and If you will please rate it on a scale from 1-10 10 being the best

Love

Is it real

Is it true

To me it is but not to you

Maybe in a parallel

Universe you know the spell

Their eyes will meet

Their fingers touch

At least I can wish it such

You and me

Not here

Not now

You say you love me, but you don’t know how

The truth is hiding in the shadows

Lurking behind the doors

Sometimes it may even creep along the floors

You are everything and nothing

All and none

A heart roller coaster with room for only one

As long as I can see your face

My heart returns to an eternal race

Look into the parallels

Can you believe the spell

I have read all of the books and seen the movie but i still hate it. I want to know if and why you like it... and before anyone says any thing yes I know that by asking a twilight related question I am contradicting myself when i say. " I'm tired of all the twilight questions" But I don't see what's so great

What do you think of my poetry.. and what age does the level of my writing portray?

http://www.booksie.com/other/poetry/kayoen_freer/t...

I have been trying to finish one of my books for a while and i was wondering which sounds more interesting

The oracle- A boy is born with the power to see things. He is far more than just an oracle, for he could see through things and had preternatural hearing. He grew to the age of 19 unknown of what he was and why these things happened... then he met her.

Terra des immortels- An separate world, an incoherent universe accessible only while sleeping. A group of teenagers begin having strange reactions to different elements and find themselves catapulted into a universe beyond their wildest dreams... or so they thought

Life and his friend death- A girl is chosen by a group of vampires to live in their coven but it seems that the entire world objects to the shy blond girl living amongst these preternatural creatures.

The year of the black sun- Isero is in a war with an unknown kingdom for their sacred sun shards. the only thing that keeps the land from going "black" When all are stolen except the guardian shard jalysa who but the tactical princess ayasha would go to recover them?

http://kayoenfreer.deviantart.com/art/My-sister-in...

http://kayoenfreer.deviantart.com/art/My-mother-in...

http://kayoenfreer.deviantart.com/art/me-in-anime-...

I've been trying to join the EA website but it says "enter a valid user name" How do get a valid user name ... or what are the requirements.

In the past I have seen many authors say things like, "Oh what a great work!" But, in my experience it's been the reader who critiques the work harshly. And the authors who should have a sharp eye for mistakes just passes over them like they don't exist. has this ever occured to anyone else?

Honestly, I am much better at poetry than being a novelist... but then again I suck at being a novelist, also tell my what age you think i am just by reading my poetry and why, but anyway... what do you think of this

http://www.booksie.com/poetry/poetry/kayoen_freer/...

this?

http://www.booksie.com/poetry/poetry/kayoen_freer/...

ok I made this up of the top of my head.

Susan went home and got on top of her husband. When she woke up her husband was gone but she had not moved in any way, how is this possible?

I am a twelve year old novelist and I could use any harsh comments or pointers...

Chapter 1: http://www.booksie.com/fantasy/novel/kayoen_freer/...

Chapter 2: http://www.booksie.com/fantasy/novel/kayoen_freer/...

Chapter 3: http://www.booksie.com/fantasy/novel/kayoen_freer/...

Chapter 4: http://www.booksie.com/fantasy/novel/kayoen_freer/...

Chapter 5: http://www.booksie.com/fantasy/novel/kayoen_freer/...

Chapter 6: http://www.booksie.com/fantasy/novel/kayoen_freer/...

On Tony Hawk's under ground there is an "evil tiki" that you can go inside... are there any more places like that???

first off, why so many vampire questions???

Yes I am a vampire fanatic and I understand the whole fad with that "book" ((no offense)) "Twilight" And I also know that By posting this question I am contributing to the many "Vampire" Questions, therefore contradicting myself.

I enjoy writing about vampires. HOWEVER, I am sick and tired of being compared to twilight.

FAQs

1) why aren't YOUR vampire's shiny?

2) where's your EDWARD?

3) is SHE the BELLA?

4) where's the ROMANCE?

...sorry... I started ranting a bit...

anyway...

What has happened to all the nocturnal, blood sucking, predator vs. prey vampire fans???

here are the links...

http://kayoenfreer.deviantart.com/art/I-love-mii-S...

http://kayoenfreer.deviantart.com/art/Dark-within-...

http://kayoenfreer.deviantart.com/art/Heavens-dawn...

http://kayoenfreer.deviantart.com/art/Good-or-evil...

http://kayoenfreer.deviantart.com/art/Ai-shirikimi...

http://kayoenfreer.deviantart.com/art/Ai-shirakimi...

keep in mind that i am no pro.

To change chapters click the numbers near the top of the chapter you are reading.

http://www.booksie.com/fantasy/novel/kayoen_freer/...

OK, I'll get this out of the way now, I am a twelve year old sixth grader alright? So any way.

What do you think of my book? Would you read more? Do you like my writing style?